Thursday, June 26, 2008

June 25

the suns beams taste my shoulders
to colder times are long over
we step closer to make an order
in perfect formation like soldiers
I get a Briskett sandwhich
and go sit on the grass with
Natalie, Erika, and Chris
and we chat about random topics
trying to consider
where in Missoula to venture
and I'll go ahead and censor
the majority of the adventure
which was filled with carousel rides
mountainous hikes
sushi and rice
and Super Nintendo fights
and when the day was filled
we sat back and chilled
Chris and I and Jill
the sun slowly setting still
a cool summer breeze
pushes the leaves
brushes our knees
we fall asleep

P.S. line 19 has what is known as an alliteration, where multiple words that start with the same letter are used in succession.

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